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Hi Bailey my name is Hana from Kawakawa School. I like the way you show what makes a good comment. But what you can do better next time is give an example of what a good comment is supposed to look like. What I also loved about your post was how to use punctuation and a capital letter at the beginning. If u would like or have time come check out my blog Click Here
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